The BFG was a poor giant that everyone thought he was evil and scary. But actually, he was the nicest giant ever who dosen't eat humans like other giants. He was tall as a building and had huge ears. He was wearing a black coat and was holding a long trumpet. He was a giant who blew good dreams into children rooms. Unfortunately, he was always insulted and beaten by other giants who were much bigger and stronger than him. One day, he met a girl named sophie. She was very scared from seeing him at the beginning. But as soon as she knew his story, they became best friends. Lady Macbeth was the opposite, she was an evil woman who wanted only to be great and powerful and who didn't care how to achieve this. She was so selfish that she wanted to kill king dunkan for her to be queen and for her husband to be king. Unfortunately, Lady Macbeth always looked like an innocent flower. But all the time, she was the snake under it and no one knew it. However, unable to bear the guilt of crime any longer, Lady Macbeth went mad and killed herself. In the end, the principal idea is to never judge someone from the look.
You need to make sure to place a period at the end of the sentence. Sometimes you go on and on and on. You need to end your sentence and start a new one.
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